In order of preference: 1. bottom left 2. bottom right 3. top left 4. top right Also, its 6/28/11 not 7/28, it's June lol.
@EVOW - I'm lovin' how clean the lines are for the most part. My only crit is if you're going to split the circle like you did on the one in the middle, you have to line that shit up a little better. @HOAX - Dirrty, but maybe lose the top extension on the X, along with those little whatever-the-fuck-you-wanna-call-em's. Your letters are dope in general, you don't need random shit taking away from them. @PURE - Bro.. Keep it to the books for a bit, you're gonna see those handies some day and be like "wtf was i thinking?" Ditch the quotation marks, and that arrow. take the time to focus on the actual letters. Close up the top of that P, and that R is a nice attempt but it's right fucked. Look at a normal "R" Does the part kicking out come from the bottom of the letter, or the bottom of the loop ? You have to learn to make your letters make sense. and if you're going to kick off your E, well.. don't. but if you do, keep your marker on the surface, you can see the split where you stopped. Also taking a couple extra seconds to juice your marker before writing will get rid of the streakiness - but you have to be careful with paint 'cause if you go too fast it'll streak anyway. Here's mine. It's been a while. Quick one-liner on some chunky-ass concrete. Red Dalo, but it looks like i didn't pump that shit enough. Critz ?
Pure start over and keep it to the books till next summer then ull look at that photo and laugh trust me! you will learn from your mistakes... also 7thIncision is write all around!
I'm fucking bored lately. Haven't been bombing. So I've been sketching constantly. Some tags for shits and giggles. Crit/Hate all you want.
acek, lovin the bottom left one kehm, right one's good to go... use it, but look out for that O lookin E
ACEK, continue with the bottom left one, its nice ^^ KEHM, leave the addons like you did to the right one. the left one looks toy cuz of the addons.
this is shit from years ago. gotta do some thin with the memorys props to elks443 who gave up graff to get himself higher in the drug game. Doubt he will ever be back on here. But if ya are. Hit me up cousin !
here are soem tags i numbered them for easier critique, this is my first time trying them so any critique is welcome
satan, 9 is good, much simpler than 6, I say take that and do it big for a good while and get used to writing simple letters before you start getting ideas... also don't make the S so big