actually i wanted to try it out without the crosses on the A also i know i fucked the 3d on the C and the S. does someone mine doing an S and a C in simple format so i can see the 3d first hand. it's been bothering me
Glad to say that this is where its at @satan, me doing you a piece would be the worst thing for you.. you would start to bite, not on purpose but you will. ya have to develop your own style
ian - like rib said ur O looks kinda like a U, but other then that i like it Shroomsh - that looks sick, i really like the cracks in it just colored this in, crits please
Ace.k- thats actually not that bad, you coulda cleaned it up a bit more though Shroomsh- lookin sick, maybe extend that bar on the X more downward. the one that goes like / EWL- work on smoother lines and you are missing the 3d on part of the E, and that top bar is funky. Mc Satan- practice more, dont overlap letters, if you do then make them consistent for each letter. , that S is funky and you should work on your lines.
thanks im jsut trying out new things as i go along,i knwo i gotta work on my S for some reason its always ugly. now was i right about the 3d on the T looking odd or is it jsut me?
its always ugly cause you need to keep practicing. the 3d looks weird cause of the angle. since you got all the negative space on the left and right it looks funny. and you are missing some on the S.
oh yeah just realized that on the S oh well at least personally i feel improvement they are taking a lot less each time. gto any suggestions on anything else i should practice?
allrite thanks, just an idea i had but should i start moving the vanishing point around also? to try out different angles?
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ok tried bigger letters and switched up the vanishing point off a bit to the side instead of center. realized to late that the N was to far away but other than that im actually kinda satisfied. what do you guys think?
yikes, you shouldnt be satisfied with that... You need to start making smarter decisions with your letters. Thats a pencil up there right? Use that pencil bro. Lol I got jokes, but on the real take more time and sketch your shit out. then after you havesketched letters draw your 3d on w/ pencil so you can fix your fuck ups before you ink it. An example of making smarter decisions would be- if your going to do a vanishing point, pick a point or spot that doesnt give you an awkward 3d. Like how your 3d is different for your A and N then it is for the rest of the letters.
i work with pencil first ten pass pen,also considering my other ones i'm actually satisfied so far. the vantage point i'm just kinda messing around with just moving it around to do 3d from various angles. that way i can hammer into my head the correct 3d for both the C and the S which i have problems with. also my S finally came out looking allrite. every other S ive drawn so far had tons of dents. so considering my previous ones yes im satisfied. also went with bigger fatter letter like i was told on previous page. gonna have something to eat and try something out without any 3d and try to get them closer together maybe lean to one side just to test out.
Don't lean, focus on simple SIMPLE letters. You shouldnt be happy with that S or any letter on there. Fix the width of your letters. it should all be even.
made it clear where i fucked up on the M by coloring it, besides that i think the other letters went well. also since im tired of drawing letters today added a lil devil on top
yoooo ribcage i was just fuckin with ya my dude, that turned out sick. Don't know if you're lookin for crits on the REACH as well but if you are, the top of the R should be a bit bigger and those weird things on the bottom left of the R and A need to go and so does that funky extension on the H. Other than that, lookin good. tbh i don't even mind that E in the basoe too much. Your fills are always clean as anything as well, somethin i like about your work. Keep it up my dude. Mc Satan, on the right track somewhat, although i think your A's need their middle lines. Also all your lines are shaky as fuck. Work quicker with the marker. Good to see youre usin bars though, keep it up One last bump, any more crits? This thing took me so long to do I would work like 5 mins on it and then walk away from it for the longest time. Been hella busy. I know the O looks like a U. Still can't rock that style. I'll also be postin up a sketch im workin on for the battle shortly when i finish it. [Broken External Image]:http://cl.ly/2z373m0B09232O1t072u/Screen_Shot_2011-07-08_at_6.01.45_PM.png EDIT:::: [Broken External Image]:http://cl.ly/2s0v2I3o1o1p1C1E311l/Screen_Shot_2011-07-09_at_11.21.52_PM.png for the battle, gonna ink and color it tomorrow. Hit me