as i was saying this is the necro-phile theme just drew reworked that woman on the right to many times, and letters are nto straight by the time i realized it i was almost done did not feel like redoing the whole thing

 

^^yo diggin that style alot, E's a little weird on that one, and i dont like the M to U connection. really good tho

 

here it is inked and colored crit pls

 

In Progress....

Something Quick.

 

mcsatan- some nice improvement.
tasty- i know man, im working on it .

more flicks later

 

Drew these while at work. top one while i was at a register and bottom one while i was on break. Crits?

 

^^ i got a crit for you, why are you drawing at work young man!!!
on srs note i dont particularly like the Y in the top one

 

defo better mcsatan..bit of mexican day of the dead going off there??

 

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Critss^
I know the bottom of the s could be tweaked.. t doesn't relly flow bf the extension on the n could use a little work. Anything else y'all see?

 

huge improvement mcsatan.

 

sin ya shits dope.
dunno if my pics are gonna upload. crit me like crazy tho only really started writing a few months ago so i wana improve

 

just a quick sketch i made from an idea i had, im pretty sure i messed up the H.

 

try writing them on a straight line

quickie simp

 

whole idea was for it to spiral inward it was just a quik 10min sketch to see it on paper

 

Used to hit up the old mindgem forum back in the day most of this is few years old but meh sketch is a sketch.

 

yo dank, im digging your work lately, youre getting closer to the point when you can start playing around with connections/ extensions (etc.). keep it up

 

wow, I'm not even gonna try to give out crits because I'm probably worse at strait letters than all of the people on this page, but it would be nice if someone helped me out anyway.

This is my second straight letter ever...

 

ay yo erays trust me ik when u start out doing graffiti you want to make the letters different because otherwise may aswell type it increase the font and print it, but letters wont look cool unless you get ur bar width and lengths down and then from there u tweak things a little bit at a time, shit takes time it will prolly be 3-4 months before your style shows through but its like riding a bike, no person hops on a bike for the first time and lands a front flip, because before they do all the flashy stuff, they need to master the basics like not falling off, got it?