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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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    McSatan I like that one alot more! It looks alot cleaner my dude. I wouldn't have like, made the K and S as crooked though. And Del my dude haha that D is nice as hell. I feel like the E should've had its middle bar straighter and I like the L just cuz it's so simple. But I agree witchu sayin that the line and square makes it look like an I haha
     
  2. Mc Satan

    Mc Satan Senior Member

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    i think it would have looked better without the drippy bits to be honest. i about the letter themselves i agree with you i do not like the E at all it just looks odd, im drawing a complete blank on how to do it otherwise though, sorry.

    SOL only thing is i drew it to damn big cant fit in a viking dude
     
  3. mista_dza

    mista_dza Senior Member

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    im gonna work on that E, lol the drippy thing was for the laughs i wanted to see what itd look like, more or less.
     
  4. Fluffy Bunnies

    Fluffy Bunnies Elite Member

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    kilsr
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    trying new shit out. rough sketch btw and i kinda went bigger at the end. didnt notice til after

    i'll try anything once. cept gay shit.
     
  5. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    mcsatan ur R is to small
     
  6. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    blurry pics >.>
    for the crome battle
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    unfinished for the skyrim battle.
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  7. MakeItTakeIt

    MakeItTakeIt Senior Member

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    That S makes no sense to me...

    Fluff those letters are hurtin right now but they got potential, finish it.

    Quick "NORTH" outline, crits would be appreciated. I wish I'd done more with the H..
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  8. Ader

    Ader Member

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    bump for crits. only got one last page IMG-20110803-00109.jpg Name: Aobi :(i realize the "o" isnt connected at the top)i know it isnt very good im just getting back into graff. took a year or so break
     
  9. SLVRONE

    SLVRONE Member

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    Ader-you 3d isnt very consistent and could use work, and it looked to me like the fill was supposed to be a cityscape, which would be cool if done correctly and i don't really like the backwards heart on the I. Imo
     
  10. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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    McSatan your R is a Lil' to small lol. But you can fit the Viking guys head and maybe an arm above the y and the r
     
  11. Mc Satan

    Mc Satan Senior Member

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    ok fixed the R made it bigger, also penciled in a horned helm,should i keep it or not?
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  12. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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    Nah just like...have the ragdoll coming out of the piece.

    But if you fail at that keep the helmet lol
     
  13. Mc Satan

    Mc Satan Senior Member

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    tried the rag doll it wasn't looking good but i still wanted to add something to it, therefore the helmet
     
  14. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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    Well in that case good luck! And try and draw your lines faster and smoother
     
  15. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    mcsatan- looks good, R seems a little squished tho
    del- those drips are weird, and that E seems awkward
    kilsr- i like that style, throw some 3D on it and it'll be bangin
    north- too many extensions, and the connections seem a little forced. and dont do the overlapping bar thing.
    ader- you need to go simpler, the extensions and connections dont look good, and that fill and background are real sloppy


    better flick for crome battle, i know the arrow coming off the E is wack, thought id give it a try tho
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  16. Mc Satan

    Mc Satan Senior Member

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    dammit nah! sell a kidney for them or something
     
  17. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    @tasty on R horizntal bar that starts the right leg of R top line of it should not be full where it meets the top right part of R ya dig? Leave that part open and it will start making your R's look better
     
  18. Mc Satan

    Mc Satan Senior Member

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    ok managed to get viking dude to look good this time, crits while i go eat dinner please. also possible color scheme's would be nice
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  19. Shit Outta Luck

    Shit Outta Luck Senior Member

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    Lol sweet and I aint telling you color schemes, get that yaself! But sometimes try and incorporate a character into your letters, have him going through them or touching them or something haha.
    And TastyMcNasty, like ribcage said lose that top lil piece of your R, and lol at the google chrome logo in there.
     
  20. Mc Satan

    Mc Satan Senior Member

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    that right there somehow sounded pervy to me