I got it man. no need to go into this much detail with the explanation. to be honest I didn't plan on aligning them, I just painted them randomly and it wasn't until dude pointed it out that I noticed it. but I like your sniper interpretation, so I'm gonna go with that story then that's why they're aligned. someone sniped my soldier
what i just did... [Broken External Image]:http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy329/lord_plankton/DSCF3210.jpg4 cant rotate it now..too lzy already uploaded like this...bang!
View attachment 611881 View attachment 611882 View attachment 611883 crits for crits i guess. lordplakton: i like the angles on that character, if you followed the angle back and had the head in the distance it would focus on the guns and shit but im not too good with characters so i can't say much jhiz: hahahaha! "jhiz cannon reppin the 302" you're bustin off. bilnek: i like your style the most, to me it looks to have the most potential it's original and even if some of the letters arn't the best, it's the originality that has me hooked. kudos. mone: im not a huge fan of your work bc i feel as though each letter would be okay on it's own and your skill level is there but your pieces don't show it. Remember you arn't drawing letters, you are drawing a piece that will work all together. kringe: no offence but i feel as though you are not up to par yet, some may disagree but you are doing the black and white scale, this means that i am suppose to focus on the letters and the letters should stand out and make me think "daaammnnnnn!!!" but these letters make me think "NEXT!!!" this is because you used the same letter S and make it the most swagged out letter but you over did it bc the other letters are boring straights, straights can be fire but the fact that you can't make those straights fire yet shows me that you are not intermediate yet, again, just my opinon. emba: those are both pretty much the same piece and they both have the same kinks. The face in the B is cool but don't over do it, and the B is covering the A too much. The E is leaning down too much and the weird extension on the B that makes it look like it's signing off is just, yeah... i dont like. but. i like your painting. you have great can control it seems. Kudos for that. Lets remember it's crit for crit.
a quick character... gotta fix the hood next time ] [/url] an two different styles of pieces... the bottom is more steezy [/url]
I think kringe pulls it off, it is kind of his style, deffs better than the kids that post in the tot blackbooks thread, he belongs here.
at first glanc ethe top one looks better, to me theyre equally "good" but the s in the top one deff has style, just kill the two top extensions...
Paser, your sketches are pretty dirty and they don't have some kind of, lets call it hype, they aren't got any special stuff that define you... but they are decent, they are nothing special but there's good technique. Plankton-i like it very much, i would color it in less normal color but hey its still awesome Jhiz- cool, you can do simple stuff. now risk doing something interesting. Mone- good as always, keep it up Kringe- do a mad fill in on that one, it would fit perfectly if you color it all in some psychidelic stuff, with alot of colors,or 3 blending colors and the first letter with one color, or mad, u kno what i mean? The guys that paint-no crit, keep it up, every painted piece is a good piece. View attachment 611911 View attachment 611912 View attachment 611913 old stuff. just to post something.
Im broke dude, last stuff i did was on toilet paper. I need to grow balls and start stealin' stuff. Tho i get beaten up by the owners.
Etcha tight work but dont hide your A behind your B's. The A's are looking like 4's since your hiding the bottom left part.
You always post here and no one gives you any crits, they just say "lol jizz cannon" make your HI wider and dont make the botom of your J so wide, make it like the bottom of the Z