[Broken External Image]:http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/4476/img20110820133117.jpg Uploaded with ImageShack.us Amen, i haven't written in forever my lines are shaky and my fills kinda whack im tryin to figure out my prismas again on the 3-d but anyways crits always appreciated centry- you got your own style which is good but it seems like you need to slow it down a little and get some structure make it more legible dank- shits clean looks really good alby- simples man you gotta learn bars make all your lines proportional
Knox - A few things I dont like about it. The letters seem to get smaller as it goes through (maybe youve taken the picture at an angle) and theres a few extensions that aren't working. The one at the bottom left of the A and the bottom right of the M, they just make it look alot less clean that it could be. That E is fucking fresh though. Same with the A if it didnt have that extension.
like that style it's raw and has an oldschool feeling to it something that would be good to start up on walls
Humr - coming here and seein that kinda work bein put in is what inspires me. Dank looks like ur piece is torn between having bends and being round Ribcage im diggin those simples nice and clean View attachment 612038 View attachment 612039 View attachment 612040
fruit- if ur gonna do somethin on a curve like that give the letters some motion but work on structure more sin- keep it up showin alota potential amen- dig the style i like the m the a is alittle too big tho draws off the focal point old sketch
pointman - that looks good, u should definitely paint that. and Im sorry if I sound stupid but who is that Char? ive seen it a million times but ive never known what it came from
its a mark bode char, he collabs wit graffiti artist from time to time and everybody uses his chars, i dont kno much about them but i kno theres the lizard and some orangey red guy with a wizard looking hat covering most of his body