thats proper, nice and simple, but still e nough style and flow to look good. my only suggestion would be to flare out the T some more
Oger dont shoot out the leg of your R like that, it you just bring it down normally till frlow with the rest of your letters that hand will be lookin pretty fresh once you get it more consistent and neater. experimenting, crits/comments?
Downwards rapist one line Keep practicing everyone been in this shit for 5 years and still learn something new daily
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Mues, I like it overlapped more than not, I saw in the throwies thread it not overlapped as much. Seems more flowing overlapped.
What you know about the crayon game, homie? Lol sorry if this is huge, I'll resize it later. Better spaced out?
Need crits plz I know i need to loose the quotation marks #1 #2 #3 #4 Crew name/tag Trying to keep it simple.
Looks like you studdered on the T. Maybe try working your M to kinda take the shape of your A or N.... lowercase I guess I am suggesting. The E falls a little flat compaired to the rest, maybe bring the middle portion completely horizontal and in line with the cross portion of the A and draw in the tail so it would line up with the rest of the E as if you where making an O and stopped... man I suck at trying to discribe something. Good luck in the battle. Stay up. NICE: I love your S.
Yo haste I'd stick with that tag, just clean it up. I like the H, but make the lines straighter. When doing long lines in a tag make sure they run parallel or it will look bad unless it's intentional and done right. See if you can make a more original A in the same style, and make it in like 1 or 2 lines. S is good until the end part, smooth it out so it flows with the direction of the letter. Crossbar of the T needs to be a bit higher and at less of an angle, and it would probably look good if it came down as far as the H to balance the tag. E just needs practice and maybe a little flair to finish it off. Good starting point though, it's got potential that's why I critiqued it hard.
yo BEASTOR, I like the 1st one the most, keep writing it! You've basically got the idea just stick 2 simples and get your tags as clean as possible and you will develop style! any crits?
That's beast Erays. I'm a major toy but maybe the middle bar of the E should be shortened a bit? Also what is that line comming off the bar in the A?