wierd blobby letters, your T looks like an r get rid of theose gay dotted lines and just totally rework it
IMG_0045 by sirduke!, on Flickr first real attempt at some sort of simple, hows it looking? IMG_0047 by sirduke!, on Flickr and a quick char for shits and gigs
not too good. G looks like an O with a bar through it, first E looks like a square O with a bar through it, and the Last E looks like an A with a connected bottom/ E with a bar through it. Dont connect the middle bar of the E to the N, and dont make the same part part of the G, end that bar of G where its supposed to end. And on the last E whyd you put a horizontal bar at the end that all the bars go into? looks bad The last few non characters you posted were simple too, and they looked waaay better than this 1. That character is dope though
yeah i feel you man, i went a little crazy with the connections haha, that last E was supposed to be backwards, but now that i look at it it def. looks more like an A. Ill keep workin..thanks man
yup, the ideas are there, the execution is just squirley. Making the same bar of 1 letter work as a bar of another is tight, you just gotta play with those connections more to see what works and what doesnt. The N into the O works, but the G into the E definetly doesnt. And now that I look, that backwards E would look tight if the middle bar was seperated from the right vertical bar of the M. And that woulda worked for the first E prolly too
Genome i really dig that style, but i would work on your G a bit, and make the front leg of the N go down instead of curving it down into the O
emace looks backwards to me lol flip yo camera around Reach - post the exchange i couldnt find it yours will be up soon View attachment 613631 View attachment 613632 View attachment 613633 View attachment 613634 View attachment 613635 View attachment 613636
^dude, you SUCK. Worry about your own shit. If you like someones shit, tell them when your posting a picture, if you dont like someones shit, tell them while posting a picture. Get it?! ... No? Still? Holy fuck kid, STOP BEING STUPID!
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@Sinn The first one is pretty good, i like the middle bottom S the best... the 2nd one is horrible i cant even read it... the 3rd one if pretty good, i like how the letters have little connections that kinda overlap the letters... if that makes any sence... I think if you slapped an outline on it and coloured in the 3d completely that would clean it up alot though.... the third one is alright, but i dont like how much random shit you have floating around your letters (the dots, the upside down cross, etc) or how it goes on a slant, that makes it harder to read the letters... I have no idea what kinda shit stain the 4th picture is trying to be... The 5th one is pretty cool, but just because its a toaster smoking crystal meth @SomberBomber I like how you were practising your bars and straight lines on the 1st one, and you have some pretty dope letters in there, like the B and the R, but the A goes too thick in the bottom where it connects to the B, and some of the connections looks really forced... Plus on the L it really looks like you were trying too hard... I like the 2nd one alot, the S and R are fucking fresh, and nothing else really jumps out at me as especially bad, other than the colours... I like the 3rd one the least, the thickness is all over the place, some of your bars dont match up, the line that goes under the letters looks really forced, and theres tons of dead space... Dead space is what you do NOT want, no matter what....
I stay doin my own thing little nigglet, Its hard not to pay attention to you when you post such retarded things. It compels me to tell you to stfu cause of how retarded you are.
[Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v490/Iceb22/TLCTenderLovingChaos.jpg *unfinished, still thinking if it's anything I should add something to it and which colors will be used. Story: Basically, it describes how the women in my life I choose to accept within it seem's to be demolitionist when it comes to my heart.
@Boar Since ya got so pissy I missed critin yours i like the lack of deadspace, but how much you pay Michael J Foxx to do that outline for you? I ain't seen somethin that shakey since muhhamad ali and WTF IS YOUR PROB WITH CRYSTAL METH? Battle me if you still hatin'. P.S. Post a pic if you wanna bitch. View attachment 613716 View attachment 613717 View attachment 613718
...what the fuck? clearly your a 13 year old girl on her period since i just hurt your feelings so bad by giving you an honest crit... Just because I didnt start riding your cock and said I didnt like a couple of your peices doesnt mean I was hating... PS I said I liked the toaster because it was smoking crystal meth you dipshit Heres some older simps, for talking
Got a new blackbook the other day and thought I would put up something new. Crits are always welcome.