dope ass page for a toy black book (for the most part)... reker I like that shit... and that guy with the random characters

 

that last post made me look at your previous one again... and sure enough, I noticed the weaknesses.
better think again, jacob. you got potential, but you've got some stuff that's really hurtin. look out

 

I did like that Kids Th@t Over Cum page though. Pleasing to the eyes haha

 

tried simple heres what i got:


i dont think it flows well so i gotta work on it. What i like is my 1st S and my U i think the 2nd S is ok and H's i'm having a hard time conquering but i'm sure with work i'll get it.

 

Keep doing that ^ Over and over and over and over and over and over again. Do it so damn much that letter bar widths will naturally be the same size throughout. Gradually add on extensions and bends. You're doing the right thing.

But the last H is bunk. Not that many bends in one bar.

 

it sucks cuz u have 2 S's and 2 H's...make em look the same, don't put different styles on 2 of the same letters

 

Hey guys this is actually my first post, been writing for a year though. Gimme some C+C please!!

 

i was always unsure what i should do about that... i tried looking at other poeples stuff with 2 of the same letters i guess when i get better i can try and make them different thanks

 

Thanks. I'm finishing up another one right now with Blockish letters. Only 1 character this time too.

 

I really llike that gass mask guy... BUT you really need to work on the letters and make them clear and big enough to read because like only half is readable...

 

hey guys, new here but tell me what you think of this piece i did today

 

itizle: you look like your trying way too hard. do some simps and work on letter structure. likin the characters though just could be a bit cleaner.

 

heres a sticker

 

meh. M and U are dece but the E and S just kill it.

 

Geza- i like that alot and the colors are dope. could be a bit cleaner but still sick. especially for a sticker
Mues- that throw isnt bad but i would take out some of the indents on the M. everything else i like

 

Well crits please!

And I know the char isn't original, so no need telling me ok thanks (edit)

 

work on cleaner lines,
but wheres the char do you mean the smiley face?
ill just say your tags nice

 

this *****, stealin characters from his little sister and shit.

@geza shits cool

@ace-k that U you think is decent, is not decent.