Ima begin 2 pull back on all my the dark colors an keep it on tha light side. those dark colors thend too not good if jr me
you could define d bit better, give it more angle on the right ba. and the first vertical bar is not straight. you could also put r closer and over e, cuz thers no gap beetwin other letters. actually the top bar of s is bit too thick, thers nothing fucked about it.
i realize the vertical bar on the D isnt straight, thats what i meant to do, lol. i feel like it woulda looked too plain with a straight bar. yeah i noticed that R as soon as i posted that shit up, was too lazy to move it and the S over. and yea, i fixed the S, first one was maaad wobly and not a good curve.
Temp, i'd add the yellow highlight to the middle bottom of the K leg just like you did with the N and make the stitch on the left leg of the N connect instead of being two separate small stitches Laying Bricks! View attachment 616017
Tempos shit looks like a 2 year old scribbled on a piece of paper... Shell- fix your D, that whole thing is mad sketchy