^^ i like that make the letters more proportional and work on ur spacing a bit

 

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i dont like how you make the last two letters drop down like 10 inches and the X's look sloppy i would replace them with just lines or somethin but the style is lookin dope.

 

those x's are k's bro ... centry nice shit man

 

feelin the red pesoe. keep practicing it
carma those E's woud look solid without that extra hump on top
n as always, give grits to get crits ya Ts

 

im sorry, but this is gross

 

pesoe . thanks man . last pic bottom right is ill i like dat man nice work

 

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^really liking the two in the dot and the h.

 

nope

 

dont know if i like that or not phat and kids idk what thjat says go simpler keep your letters the same size

 

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ribcage we are fuckin losers lol nice consistent style man

 

lol yep, that was for the battle, but I forgot to send it... thanks

 

Dude, looks gnarley. Love your style. I don't have anything to critique about it. I think the x's look fine and I like the way the letters drop. I sometimes get crap for dropping letters, but I just like the way it flows.