Try to make your letters not look like Jell-o jigglers.

 

King. Back to bars.

 

did this last night. kust something i didnt in like 5 minutes! and crits??

 

king ever hear less is more? same applies to graff
simple i did today
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Less is infinitely more, until you need to know more, and you will know when that is. It isn't now.

 

to get critical,rather see that same thing in paint on canvas.

 

did this tonight.... not happy with fill..

 

Wonky - Inside..?

 

Wonkey, I'm those are legit. Not really feeling the colors on the last one though

 

@wonkey- ur letters have good structure, but ur hiding them to much, the S and the E are way to far under the others, try spacing them out a bit more

 

Holy shit Hick finally changed it up I'm so happy....

literally the first two ever done with more than three colors on paper.....yay christmas

 

Speak show me a straight letter no extensions no bullshit id honestly be more impressed
Inside - Your colours are clean but letters are shit (no offense) work on the individual flow of the letter i mean the bottom of that S is scaring me man
Tempo - Make bars the same width THROUGHOUT THE PIECE! SYMETRY (idc how its spelled) IS KEY!
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I definately need to space my letters out. But shit letters? Wow. Cheers!

 

page is looking decent here's another quick ting

 

Nice structure Know. Finish it!

 

I'd work on the e but that may fuck with the spacing too much

 

Crits?