Crits?



Im not sure about how i like the bottom of the p and im thinkin about squaring off the lower part of the s

 

definatly fix the p' and the size like of the k and the p ya no what im syin compared to the s

 

hipe i love your style for throws, i know youve already done one before but can you do a naked? i suck at throws still so i could just try a piece out for you

 

word Ill hook u up man I suck at pieces so a simp would even be cool
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alright lets just post these in the exchange thread, thanks man

 

cool will do

 

dope stuff hipe like them throws

 

thanks what you write ill get u a throw up too

 

hell yea i write zeno..ill throw u a hipe as well

 

dope stuff thanks mann

 

thanks man I hate z's

 

what! peso, stick with the style you got going on the first flick pronto!

 

Really my first try with a name/throw..I know they suck and I'm not sure if I like the name, Vekz. But any criticism/advice would be appreciated.

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A lot of you can probably tell who I got the V from haha..I just fucked around and came up with the throw real quick.

 

fill up a few old phonebooks with "practice" so your letters improve..

 

@gemer ok yeah thanks

 

thanx,the artist wanted it supposedly to look like a fish and the first letter is a lowercase a

 

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