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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. must.bomb.chicago

    must.bomb.chicago Member

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    I'm with phat on this one. if your guna change the vanishing point, don't do it on one letter. it looks stupid. start it from the middle, make it look like its wrapping around you.
     
  2. SONE.

    SONE. Senior Member

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    yo phat, the 3d on the two flicks you postes is not 3d. its all part of the letter. you cant put that 3d on mones peice..... does not work. hed have to do everything totalyl different to get that look.

    like i said, youre weird dude.
     
  3. SONE.

    SONE. Senior Member

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    i thought i should post this back up. its finished now, not rly happy with it. i like my S and E but the N is fucked.

    lol and the handy done up top is wack. : /
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  4. kwu

    kwu Senior Member

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    I wouldn't go as far as saying it looks stupid or retarded... even though the 3d on the s might not interact with the rest of the letters' 3d, that page still burns anything thats been posted lately in here

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  5. SONE.

    SONE. Senior Member

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    yeah i jsut finished it up, finaly outline and a burn.

    thats sick kwu. I think the second A is a lil big though, the middle bar is too steep for me, keeps pulling my eye.
    Your style is vicious. Ever do fills..?
     
  6. Phillip McDougall

    Phillip McDougall Elite Member

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    please get this shit out of here...
    I'm really sorry but those letters are hideous.. no matter how much color you splash on them. Follow Kwu's example and learn how to do clean simples with no color.
     
  7. DieHippie

    DieHippie Senior Member

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    lol yeah your letters are off . you cant distract people with pretty colors . well you can , just not us vikings of course .
     
  8. kwu

    kwu Senior Member

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    bottom page bump toss me some crits, the m bothers me the most
     
  9. Mori

    Mori Senior Member

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  10. Zookyook

    Zookyook Elite Member

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    its probably because the 3d all comes together and leaves that little blank space in the M, i think the M is the most solid letter, the As kinda look like a mix between capital and lowercase, the T is dope shit i like it a lot... but if u have 2 As in ur name them shits gotta either match or be totally different or itll kinda look off, the 2nd A is way taller and skinnier, if they were closer to the same itd look better... all in all its a dope simp, thicken up the lines that overlap (where the letters touch) to match the thickness of the rest of em..... but as it stands u could throw some fill and highlights on it and itd still be fresh


    from the last page mone thats real clean i dont think u were going for a full 3d piece...

    and mori ur characters are pretty nice, really feelin that MR from the last page too
     
  11. SONE.

    SONE. Senior Member

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    The letters style is a matter of choice. there is not some objective perfection in graff. negative space and the style of my letters are on purpose. I thought bombingscience was still cool, but you people are putting fucking blinders on. yeah KWU has sick structure, but all i ever see from him is blank letters with the exact same steeze. You ppl need to break outta the fucking box.


    "work on letters" isnt constructive. What do u mean by that? start biting kwu??? or do phils retarded ass simples with fucked up extensions?

    I dont even see photos of sketches in phil's or diehippies latest posts. fucking draw something already.
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  12. KinkyStab

    KinkyStab Senior Member

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    just some quick shit i did to post havent been on in like 8 months!


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  13. SONE.

    SONE. Senior Member

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    BUTS--The T is kinda throwin me off. i wanna read it as BUPS not buts. but i like the steeze, those chunks with the lil extensions connecting them could be cool, but you have them in unecessary places i think. keep at it
     
  14. kwu

    kwu Senior Member

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    respect ZOOK, I hear you out

    n SONE, don't get your panties in a bunch... ye letter style is a matter of choice, but the style comes from proper execution. So you decided to rock a style with fragmented bars... the idea is ill, but the fundamental composition of the letter structure is soo off that I wouldn't be able to read it if I didn't already know what it said. The reason phil is an ass is either because he's got a stick in the butt or he's tired of people posting in here that think they've graduated from simple letter structure and try to step their game up but completely miss because they lack the fundamentals. You have the basics and the potential I can see it in your production. But understand that when someone tells you to kick a couple of simples it means that you get back in that fuckin box, execute that shit, and THEN break outa that box with fuckin real style.
     
  15. Phillip McDougall

    Phillip McDougall Elite Member

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    i don't see the point in being a penis face. your letter structure, flow, and design is horrid and ugly. work on it. that's all I need to say.
     
  16. SONE.

    SONE. Senior Member

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    graff is a personal exercise.

    well said KWU, but ive been rockin simples for fucking years; amd i get so mad when im trying something new and ppl just give advice saying "go back to simps" or "get that fucking shit outta here". that shit is not helpfull atall. and think about it, do you really wanna just come here to see simples everywhere? doesnt anyone enjoy colouring their pieces to completion anymore?

    Fact may just be that i cant give you what you ppl think is dope. I do what i like, and i post it here cause noone i know writes. I dont care if you cant read it, i see the structure and know it says what it says, i enjoy the overall look. theres no fucking way im posting exclusivly in the toy section. i come here for critiques and advice; not to be the focus of some douche baggers ego trip.

    appreciate your position KWU, and again, you ever fill those sketches in? would love to see something finished from you.

    PHil, still dont like you or your steeze.
     
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  17. DieHippie

    DieHippie Senior Member

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    so what do you do ? draw your babyback bullshit and then go check peoples post to pic ratio ? boy please raise up off these n-u-ts cus u gets none of these , at ease .

    what is it ? sone ?
     
  18. W_G_O_N_E

    W_G_O_N_E Elite Member

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    ^i would take phil's advice , your letters are simple but they need a lot more structure man , and jesus sone i just took the time to read your above post , go back to simps
     
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  19. 4menace2society0

    4menace2society0 Banned

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    ni99as on the internet are bitch made......mainly because 90% of you arent actually writers and if you are you get no love for your bitchassnes
    i mean if you post your shit on here you know people are going to comment, now if you say you dont care and blah blah blah, then why pay attention to em?!
    foreal though shut the fuck up and post, if your shit gets deleted dont cry and post when you think your shit has gotten better or just stay out the thread
    not like this thread is even fuckin decent anymore lol
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  20. SONE.

    SONE. Senior Member

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    obvs i care a bit, otherwise i wouldnt fuckin post here.

    its clear many ppl on hear dont write, and use this as the place to boost their graff ego.

    place would be decent if ppl who post here would actually post their sketches instead of flamming others.
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    would rather see a page of shitty sketches instead of ppl flexing nuts on the internets
     
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