Not to be anal but technically its a 2liner. Id say go with the top one but dont kick the leg of the R out so much and make the e bigger. For you 1 liner work on the r and make the l not look like a v.
ha ha yea i didnt really count that thing on the R on the one/two liner lol. but yea thanks for the crits dude ill try that out
oie_1664652GudZUoyE what i got so far. It's gonna have to change tho cause it totally looks like i bit owl...
Skate: You've got something going keep working on consistency and finding what feels fluid as you write it and looks good to you. Try using something a little thicker. Snoke: Both are tight. Like Norf said, the L on the bottom looks like a V. Norf: I like it. Skaep: You're getting some style. Keep rockin' it out. Ditch the circle above the A. Wack: write it a million times. flick for jabber. Crits?
Haha PETER, no joke when i first started with my name I had a tag going that looked almost exactly like that. I noticed it mostly cuz of how you kinda teardropped the p. And thanks for the crit, ill work on some other stuff without the circle above A
a couple hands i did today Untitled by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr Untitled by Stewart Stevenson, on Flickr
thats not half bad gerb, try and keep the top of your letters from leaning in and that would be way fresh
thanks man, ive never even tried it keeping the tops straight, it will probly look better so thanks for the advice
haha this spots not ghetto at all, its in a huge ravine under a bridge that freights go over and even sometimes stop on edit: in a rich neighborhood
saafe negro.. but make the middle of the m pointy to distinguish it... you gotta look out especially since there's a u next to it
That silver looks white, from the looks of it the yellow handstyle looks nice.Maybe just space out the silver one, but it's probably just cramped because of the limited space, I like em.