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gerb- i like the second one, i wouldnt underline with the bottom of the b though, and try not squaring the bottom of the b also. loge- i like the first hand the best. space the l out a little bit, and the l kinda looks like a u/v i have that problem to seder- the silver/white one is the best, i kinda like that its tight together but thats just me dkode- i dno man hit the books for a while. second is the best looking though kersoner- drop all the loopy shit and extras and fix that second r. looks nice though simple.
Lol work on your ink flow control. And I might be seeing this from wake n bake this morning, but is the black and white tag making a zebra face? I mean, theres a mouth, and all the bends on your K look like stripes...
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hah i see it now.. i didnt do the mouth on the bottom but i kinda placed the tag like that on purpose ...
Crits? sorry the pics shit idk where my cam is haha so I had to use my shit webcam Also the hit is Bits, looks a bit like Bite or Site or something haha
'Crook'-it has a nice flow, i would work on your e... and i noticed the last three letters aren't in that kind of slant the rest are, so i would work on that as well
You contradicted yourself, homie. Flow is defined by the even composition of letters in a hand. The H and A need to be on the same level as the rest of the word. Shit like keeping your letters leveled and even is what determines flow. That swoosh you gave the H hurts, too.