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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. SynOne

    SynOne Senior Member

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    Dank I think the bottom right one is distinguished enough. I would read that as a L, but the other two I would have read as an O, just make sure that the L and the O have obvious different widths.
     
  2. KehmONE

    KehmONE Senior Member

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    Agreed.
     
  3. ven0m

    ven0m or Phat2

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  4. Rask Wsk LA

    Rask Wsk LA Senior Member

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    venom, lose that cross the top is the only one i think is steezin,
    seldom , nice just keep doin that blac one
    mues, the top brown one steezin, n the shit in pen kinda steezin too edit: work on yo S tho
     
  5. Shay70

    Shay70 Member

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    venom- i think the second last one is nice, keep it simple
    seldom- thats a hot style im liking it a lot
    rask- clear up the s and r and thatll look steezy

    shoot me crits on this - be brutal
    Photo on 12-03-18 at 14.21 PM #2.jpg
     
  6. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    1st ones nice, venom
     
  7. toyburky

    toyburky Member

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    Hi look at my tag(i drawed it on paint so its not so good as it should be),give comments on this i know that the tag is ugly but stil,comment it :D
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    And give me some tips i have no idea for the letter R.
    Thanks
     
  8. sadgeh

    sadgeh Senior Member

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    Do some real ass handwriting on real paper
     
  9. notmikegiant

    notmikegiant Senior Member

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    @ toy - you need more tips then just the letter R, look at your keyboard and duplicate those letters, and do it on actual paper.

    @ venom - dig the first one, really clean.

    dropped a lot of the bars and nonsense i was doing before, crits are always appreciated - also for me if i dont drag the X then it makes the whole tag look kind of stocky, let me know if im full of shit

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  10. Skaep

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    @shay70 i would define your p a bit more and get the e's to match the size of the rest of the letters

    @toy listen to these guys^^

    @notmikegiant good start imo (don't take me for an exact example) but practice it over and over on paper, fill a notebook or whatever. Just write it over and over, you'll get a flow and tigheten up the letters. And just in general try to practice by writing mostly with your elbow, you dont always get a spot or chance to rest your wrist on something. This is what Ive been doing:

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    Ive noticed my tags with markers when im out are a lot better.
     
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  11. Skaep

    Skaep Member

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    Thinkin of changing....SCAEP or BRAND?

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    brand1.jpg

    skaep had no meaning to me, and if i keep it i like the c more. Just looking for some opinions.
     
  12. toyburky

    toyburky Member

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    hey thanks for the tips
     
  13. sadgeh

    sadgeh Senior Member

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    Jing - simpler
    Skaep - i say do scaep you know the letters more and it will looking better
     
  14. Zest3

    Zest3 Senior Member

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  15. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

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    can I get some crits on this? Id give some crits but dont know if my handstlyes even good enough to give any

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  16. upper90daynnight

    upper90daynnight Senior Member

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    Jing start simple, and then get more complicated, you cant start complicated it just never works, trust me haha ive tried it and epicly failed, Its like building a car from scratch and you spend more time on the paint and body kit, even though the engine doesnt work, you need to have the basic neccesitys down first and then you can make it look dope, keep working on it though
     
  17. upper90daynnight

    upper90daynnight Senior Member

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    whats it supposed to say? WILS?
     
  18. Willis1989

    Willis1989 Senior Member

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  19. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    dying marker, das a lower case E
     

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  20. aiko

    aiko Senior Member

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    im lovin me that crosshair action venom

    just some bs for bs
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