Lookin good, I like it. Only complaint is the S in the word Handstyle. It's not that great, all the other letters are good so far.
Restart: Do what your username says. Just use your standard handwriting. Don't try to sugar coat your letters. Shit letters are shit letters.
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Kehm, your style of 'gase' is flowing like that of 'ease' Try extending the bottom of the S a bit towards the A, and you need to make your G look less like an E, i seriously thought you were trying to write ease. Also juke, your style is sick, but if i have to tell you one more time to rotate that god damn photo i am going to rape your mother. And peon.. I dont quite know whats going on there, but i dont think i care to. Clean that shit up.
Haha, at first I was like "ease, wtf is he talking about?" Then I looked at my G again... makes sense. I'll try changing the bar on the G up a bit. Although, I'm pretty sure I'm gonna stick with SEGA.
the first has great philly potential you just need to bring it all in a bit tighter, and it'd be sick. id also throw a flip off the top of the d to the right if you're gonna use that handwritten flow
sup heads its been a while since i posted around here, ima upload some flicks soon up here. just some advice for everybody who just started posting on this thread recently and looking for help.... don't try to bite someone else's style or look up these alphabets on the internet... just start to write your name down simple as fuck... try fucking with each letter to see which flows with what... cop a notebook and fill it up with just tags.. write your shit over and over till you get sick of it and you'll start to develop oh and another thing i have always hated about this thread... don't post fucking garbage ass tags up here and say "crits?" you shouldn't be relying about getting a crit here you should be practicing and practicing instead of posting and posting shout out to muse, phat2 and peter for giving my legit crits over the time.... i think i finally got my O down