You've got good starter right there. Put some more work in that and make it a lil fresher. Try to have yOur shadows, and your hollow look be the same style
Just pieced this new throwie together today still working on getting my consistency up, not quite used to it yet, and thinking of throwing a swirl on the D and lower half of the B ignore the green paint marker explosion.
Its kinda weird to see faces on letter without holes, so that gives me a vibe that its an A if I were to see it on the street.
seno, i have the same problem, you need to work on the proportions of your letters, keeping them sized.
word, i've been sketching it all day to get some practice in and it's a bit more consistent now, the D's more in sync with the other letters
@antik something i was playing around with. I thinnking of a re dranw with thicker taller letters and better drawing skill. and a throw EDIT sry bout pic quality...im working on it.
that's an interesting idea. I like it. The K reminds me of kiss. If you do redo it. Taller for sure. As for the throw I like the FE, but feel the LY are lacking a little. Try modeling your Y off of the F. As for the L I've got nothing....
Back from a hiatus, and lovin it again Lyfe: Trash that throwie and start over please. Your L looks a lot like your E and a lot like a C. And the rest of them just look retarded. Your E also looks like it could be a C. You need to at least have something that distinguishes it as an E. Google "graffiti throw ups" Look at as many pictures as you can.
^ na your advice is redundant.. don't worry about other peoples shit when your looks like that flick for speech
we both know your a skilled writer compared to most of us around here. I was just trying to give you some sort a crit, because the majority of the time there isnt anything to say about your work besides nice!!