First page in my blackbook and the sharpie bleed through the paper

 

nearly all markers do just put blank pages behind it....also try keep your sketch straight notice the way it slants

 

yh it because of the way i taken the photo

 

Skiz: yes work on that.

 

Yes!!!! Like Mori said and try and fit the middle bar of the E with the leg of the R. I think that might flow a little better.

 

Cred- what do you use for your highlights?

Critz Please !

 

IMG_0290 by sirduke!, on Flickr

the N to the O is kinda fucked up but is there anything else that Ishould work on?

 

preciate it Dempo

 

My advice to everyone is eliminate deadspace usre your bars make your letters symetrical and make sure every letter has flow standing by itself or in your name
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P.s. My buds better then yours....

 

exchange for humor

 

@ sin . nice pages.
and tasty lookin nug there

thanks for xchange dank.

 

sin dude that bud look like a hairy tarantella with its legs ripped off! feelin that page with all ur buddy taggs . good shit
dank I miss those sweet keyboard letters you used to buss out like nobody I kno
emace just keep at it dude and you will get closer to where u wana b. try to keep your holes in the letters the same.

 

IMG_0226 by centrysams, on Flickr

 

CRED: all your shit is dope, work on some of your structure with your wilder shit. stay up homie.

 

sinn: you should be in the intermediate thread bro

 

I appreciate it Kinger.

@Centry i love that whole page.
@Dank that top one is freshhh.

trying to clean it up and bring it all together. Letters arent cut out, just tried giving them a bit of a shadow.

 

^^ thats shit is on fire kasm

cred that connection from r to e is proper. But the sharp kick out on the d idk about that kind of throws off the form of the d... just my opinion keep in mind your more advanced than me.

 

I agree with humor here cred. My personal opinion (which is like an asshole, we all got'em) is it would vibe better if you flipped your c for the curve of the d.