i like that it starts off rounded, but you got pointy, you need to soften dat shit up, 2 ton cans of wupasss
First off, I see flow in this it's all rounded more or less, but the m looks like an E fell over keep the shape of the m but make it straight. The g would look sick if you took the very bottom extension/bit off of it. and then the S its nice but maybe try leaving a bit more space between the middle and the top part and the bottom part after you get the g and the m fixed.