Crits?

 

@Kroe. you should fatten up your G and have your P come down just a bit lower so it doesnt look so short. you should work on the arrow thing on your G, dont really dig the way it is right now and make the first bump on the top of your G bigger so it matches the other bump more, this just needs to be cleaned up and then it would look really dope on a wall. i like your E and the shape of the O is cool. keep at it man


illegal drugs, make the top part of your R come down abit further and have the bottom part of your A bigger, its looking good though keep at it.

 

Thanks for the crits

 

to be honest both of them are sloppy, but i would work on the bottom one, just clean it up and go simple, A and N need the most work, just start simple man, your R is on the right track i think just has to be cleaned up and what not

 

the R is solid , rest looks like it was drawn and filled by michael j fox

 

why feel the need to post your illegal work on a board, for self gratification?

 

Thanks my dude

 

@wiz still way too much empty space...you need to bunch your letters up

 

@hoers yea i know, this was a month or so back.. But i will bunch them up when i go out again.

 

6i9o, doesn't look like you're in any position to shit talk me hahaha.... and you said my shits wackk??? Take some advice and don't talk shit unless you've got somethin to back it up. You saying my shit is wack means absolutely nothing to me now that I've seen all your work...

 

exuse the wackness on the bottom .

IMG_0253 by centrysams, on Flickr


IMG_0260 by centrysams, on Flickr



IMG_0259 by centrysams, on Flickr

 

Centry the top left in the first picture is fucking dooope, and the third picture is the best one in my opinion

 

thanks bro .

 

Woah when did I say that dude?
I just went through the last 5 pages and I see nothing about shit talking you. If anything your throw's are sick =/ You got me confused for someone else

 

@Tak - shits lookin good, just make sure you're keeping your bar widths consistent (K gets a little thin in some spots) and if you're gonna round off the ends of one letter, do it all the way through (like the T is rounded off but the A has sharpened edges)
@Wiz - just like Hoers said get those letters close together, work on them too, imo youre not ready for paint, work on keeping all the letters consistent and close together
@Humor - shits so dope, props dude i hope i have throws like you when i grow up lol
@Bipo - youre getting better, just keep working on consistency and shit...yeah

tryin to get this right...crits?

 

kroe that first one sucks for real and kinda the second, and is wizard being serious ?

 

theyre both the same as the third except for the G...
plus, seeing as you have no posts showing your graff i dont really think your in any position to just blatantly say my shit sucks with out any crit or reasoning behind it, watch yourself

 

Those top 2 are dope Kroe. I was playing with mine a bit, every time I end up happy with it... give it a day and then I hate the way it looks again.