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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    not the part thats connected to ur E, like when u do the top loop of your r then it looks like you go out and up to the top then down into the kick, srry it sounds confusing but i hope u get wat i meen, it looks like u already have flow in ur handmovements just need to clean it up and shit. and yeh going out and tagging shit helps cuz it pushes you to want to progress and put up really clean stuff. just keep practicing dude
     
  2. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    i have no clue what you're talking about hahha
     
  3. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    haha fuck and i dont got a cellphone anymore either so i cant draw out what i meen. when you do the R you make your first vertical bar with your E right, that looks good, then u do the first circle/loop at top of R then it looks like from there u go up and out to the top were then it comes back down around to the bottom going into the kick of your R. i hope that helps more :/ but just reading it over sounds confusing lol
     
  4. TastyMcNasty

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    i get it now haha, but i dont see whats wrong with it? its all done in one fluent motion
     
  5. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    its all up to personal preference, i see its done in one smooth fluent motion but i just think it would look better if you went out and down into the bottom kick rather then up and around down into the kick of the R. or maybe try having it where when you make the main top loop/circle of your R go out as u normaly would then down but on an angle back towards ur main veritcal bar then out into the kick....sounds confusing, i suk at explaining this stuff lol
     
  6. karecard

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    IMG201.jpg hey guys got my new tag, avoke, thought of evoke but realized an a would look better, and apparantly theres some "revoke" guy already. any way tell me wat u think
     
  7. Rasm

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    Revok, dipshit.
     
  8. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    I FUCKING DIED!!!!!!!! hahahahahahahahahahahahaha. Ya who is this Revok guy???? i've never heard of him bahahahah
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  9. karecard

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  10. Z3BRA

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  11. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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    nice one? learn to at least quote properly haha
     
  12. karecard

    karecard Senior Member

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    why, shouldnt matter aslong as you get the point.
     
  13. Rasm

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  14. Z3BRA

    Z3BRA Elite Member

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    clearly says ReDOlb
     
  15. SilentVandal

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    Been working on it some more.. Crits?
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    Just experementing on this last one.
     
  16. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    ^ looks good but il say the same thign i said last time, i think you should have the first vertical lines of your M and A closer to ur letter so the letter is more clear and it doesnt just look like sharp waves. its not as bad on the bottom one minus the A..keep practicing dude
     
  17. Z3BRA

    Z3BRA Elite Member

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    @MARY

    I like the third one
     
  18. zachatnca

    zachatnca Senior Member

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    theres a well known writer in new york who writes denz...
     
  19. zachatnca

    zachatnca Senior Member

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    friend wants some crits, whatcha guys think?
     
  20. Z3BRA

    Z3BRA Elite Member

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    you should cut the one liners