EWL, looks good, the 3d at the top of your E looks off though and like Willis said, that line inbetween the E and W shouldnt be there, u missed the 3d on the middle top part of your W also and maybe the bottom bar of your L could have been abit fatter..looking good though, keep at it dude Kroe thats sick, wish i could draw characters like that lol Onsa go simpler, try some basic letters malto looks cool but i still think that right leg of your R could come out abit further..just my opinion though
cheers man i tried bringing the r out a bit in another sketch but this one was in a pissy little A5 blackbook and wouldnt fit heres the finished sketch, i need new markers to fill the shit [Broken External Image]:http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t500/frazetta1/002-1.jpg
that looks dope, somthing about the M seems off though, i think the 2 legs of it could use some work but overal it looks cool. the kicks on the f and R are dope
What REALLY looks wrong about the M is just that he didn't come down with the 3D on the middle of the M like he did with the rest of the parts so it looks rounded instead of squared and the 3D is also off because of it. Or he could have just defined the edge around the squared parts of the M with the black border he did with the rest of it where its not dripping. The rest of it looks awesome though .
how do you quote wat other pple said in your sig? i gotta quote this "Too much negative space in your M. Tighten the legs up like a Christian"
reply with quote, copy paste it into ya sig dont pay attention to the 3d or E cause its wack but better M maybe? still working on it but, this M is gunna be death of me [Broken External Image]:http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t500/frazetta1/001.jpg
thanks Malto maybe with your M instead of having it going slighting inwards from the start, have it first going outward like an obtuse angle a little bit then bend in slightly, i dono though i find M's tough as well, good luck with it man lol
fuckin got my own page goin on here [Broken External Image]:http://i1062.photobucket.com/albums/t500/frazetta1/003-1.jpg
Ewal - Clean, keep it up Kroe - Nice characters would like to see one painted. Fumer I like your style, the bottom piece is dope. Fucked up pretty much every letter on this one but thot fuck it ill just post it anyway
just a old sketch this i coloured, using sharpie fine line markers [Broken External Image]:http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/1227/imgpage0013.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/9853/imgpage0014.jpg
That's looking really good now, I like the background you did on it too. I like that colored one a lot, it reminds me of fireworks lol.
like many people tell new peeps, start out with more keyboard like letters. you gotta walk before you can run. don't get too funky too quick.
Abelk. you seem to have the idea of bars down, but way too much going on... bends for no reason, connections that don't work, etc. do that ^ and see the new to graffiti thread.