you have the right idea, but your lines are nasty, do it faster and bigger heres an idea from the C to S but seriously faster n bigger will help your flow a lot..
your trying to hard man.. one liners are not easy. just practice regular throws.. sometimes you might be able to keep a line going threw to the next letter... but dont force it.. just let it flow.. it will come in time.
theres one i did somewhat backwards one liner, all the letters are still in the same order its just theyve been individually flipped, rather than the word flipped as a whole kinda confusing im aware