diggin that bottom smoer except for the R i dont know why but it just doesnt look right, i like the E though. been pretty happy with my shit lately so made some changes, not really liking the S its too long and the E's need some work. Looks better if you use your hand to cover the s
yo tasty the more i see ur style it grows on me, i think a thin double line filled in to thicken up some of your lines might be worth a shot. peace
looks good tasty, i like that E and R but the R doesnt match really thanks semp, thats looking better but the S is kinda off, maybe slow it down a little bit and do a few more straight keyboard letters, keep at it dude
im gonna restart one, i still got one in pencil but i dont like it. hopefully have it done in a day or 2 here
@kaze- that bottom one is the one man, nice stuff! @lost- feeling that simple, only thing i might adjust is the E on the left-side to where it doesn't cut into the opening of the P, but other than that its good man. Dicking around on break, starting the outline on this REKER piece. Definitely not finished, just figured i would show the breakdown. REKER
@tasty, sounds good il try to have urs done sometime this week 2 lost not really digging the E or the top thing on the A, i think its too big, looks good other wise mene2, thanks and that looks sick, try to make ur second R more like the first one though, that first R and K r dope dempo lose the splash/drip things coming outa ur letters
@reker that outlines lookin good homie View attachment 632648 View attachment 632649 any crits on the blue outline. Tryin some new shit props to all the guys doin their shit on here
kaze- some nice solid simples there fresh- i'm digging that the H underlines all the other letters, it doesnt flow too well. apes- it flows well, but i feel like the letters are too top heavy which makes it look like there's too much negative space at the bottom. not being an asshole, just my opinion. exchange for seyor:
to draw, or to prgress to the style? it took me about two hours from a blank page to finished, and i've been writing on and off for six years.
Shit son lol ive only been doin it for 2 years solid with some breaks inbetween. Either way tho thay shit is tight. Any tips for tightening up the flow?
well i'm not really the best person to ask cause i'm not exactly at the top of my game, but for me, i put a big emphasis on symmerty, like, the S and the R both have kicky out and swirly parts on the letters and the Y is directly in the middle and the extensions kind of mimick each other on either side, and trying to keep the letters rough the same size and consistant thicknesses,