kroe - looking good, im really digging the 3rd one but get rid of the extension on the side of the A finally colored this one too
Decieded imma drop some crits. @gopher: you cold drop some serious bombs man with thos simps man (dat blue sticker). On the second one i dont really digg the things around o, otherwise its nice, i can see u understand perspective and shadows. albert - you need to work on your a. e somehow fucks the flow, im feelin like it could use some more funk like b and r. Just keep it on man. @ewal - ellipses are bad. Space is kind of crooked too. @reker: simps are clean all i can say, first e on last flick could have some more space though. But im really feelin the fineliner one. but maybe you could drop the diamond shaped serifs. Nice work. @klue: practise your outlines. the bar widths are fucked up, dont overlap bars like u did on u if you want to keep it simple and well-working. bg is fuked up too. @hogar: bad attempt, you can do better. not hatin, just sayin how yall can improve
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what space are you referring to? the spaces between the letters? and yeah the ellipses aren't perfect but i made the marker bleed on purpose so that they would look a little grainy have you ever played portal 2?
no, i played portal 1. i dig the idea. I was reffering to space itself, seemed to me you missed vanishing point with some lines.
Your startin to be kinda gay mang. You copied that shit, shame on you. And what's up with that sig? You into gay pride or something? Lol
Kroe- That first simple is dope. just enough to give a little flair. Out of all of them im diggin the 3rd one the most. handies a little weak The P-h combo on the forth one does't look right for some reason. Ewal- The three D just seems off to me. Thats a crazy style to pull off. The top bar on the E is throwing it off for me. Clean lines though Mene2- That first one is real clean, would be great on a board. The script is mean. Throw a 3-d and make it Red outline and a white fill and it will go for days In the third picture the E's dont match up but the R's and K is dope. Exchange? Klue- Not diggin the U at all. The letters seem to be working against each other instead of for. Hogar-The g is hidden to much id say, if you spaced the letters out you would probably be happier with it Noa- Work on getting your hand steadier. Id say work on your letter flow more and wait on the details Getting in the spirit of halloween Exchange with the fiance