pases ish is faaaaat some drawings i did for tech n9ne and krizz kaliko when i saw them 2 sundays ago [Broken External Image]:http://sphotos-d.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/384098_10152103170775244_1855711451_n.jpg
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If I may, Id say its cause the color schemes your using. you should use colors that contrast more, and try to tone down using the same color for your outline as you do in the 3d when u do your more intricate fills (unless you have a border outline that contrasts better and then a background to go with it all). Like the last one would have better with a dark color in the 3d to contrast that bright pink. Or in the 3rd one from the bottom, if you woulda outlined the black with white, and then did blue 3d, and then did the yellow outline, it would give it another element visually... prolly not what stuck means, but thats something I can see.
also, i see that your line cleanliness varies a lot within the same piece. like you'd have crisp clean lines for the outlines, then fuzzy, dirty lines in the details and stuff (as if you moved your hand further away from the wall when doing them) that makes your pieces look sloppy
i think its mainly on your color choices. Like The black and blue one was good and would have looked way better if your force popped hard. Like a bright yellow or something but the grey is it? kinda pulls it in to the mess that you want over.
@Mori- I'd choose different colours, to atleast make your work pop. Haven't posted in awhile, the last two flicks are from a jam last weekend. Was dope times.
@Leopold- that jam wall is sick man! Getting into the blk & wht pieces heavy, don't know why just like they way it looks! -REKER-
i see heavy influence by rime on the character and your peices need colour especially with that style
yeah i was watching some msk shit today and got the idea to throw a character in there this time! Made the character up myself just did the arms the way rime does to make it go with it. And yeah i know the reason i leave mine in blk & wht is because if it looks good like that it'll look sick colored
scank and reker dope shit [Broken External Image]:http://sphotos-e.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/419127_10152106383730244_2012927863_n.jpg
Mene2, look up the use named "Bait" here and check how he colors his sketches. Do that to these pieces you're posting and I think it'll be doper than dope
@crushin- looks good man really dig your style! @venom aight will do man thanks, i just did another sketch that i still working on check this out and see what you think. Im still working on it! -REKER-