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Blackbooks

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Gibbs93

    Gibbs93 Banned

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  2. Mildstyles

    Mildstyles Elite Member

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  4. Shit Outta Luck

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    Naked your K, E and D leave too much open space between em compared to the N-A. Also the E is turned a bit too much...
     
  5. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    don't listen to these guys about no upper case lower case shit. your E was just too high up and a bit too big. I don't feel that N though, the bottom flattish curve part. idk how to describe it. and finally you coin some 3d, but cut the 3d at a certain point before it hits the dot, ya kno?
     
  6. Shaanny

    Shaanny New Member

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    Black Books was produced in a multiple-camera setup, and was primarily filmed at Teddington Studios in Teddington, London,[2][3] with exterior scenes filmed on location on Leigh Street and the surrounding areas in Bloomsbury.[3] The debut episode premiered on 29 September 2000[4] and three seasons followed, with the final episode airing on 15 April 2004
     
  7. xquisnhr513

    xquisnhr513 New Member

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    okay so im new here and decided to post some of my more recent work to get crits is you guys dont mind... appreciate it.


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  10. TastyMcNasty

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    not your graffiti
    buh dum psshhh
     
  11. Mr. Ignorance

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    TrandomnesstwO Senior Member

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    It's been months since I've been last posting, got caught raided and all but it's been a straight year now,
    Back at the blackbookin'
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  13. Norfsuthr

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    Can't read that^ what is it Rasp? Hard for me to judge based on that but maybe take it a little more simple and work back to where you were before quitting
    Agreed. Try giving the K some bends like the A does, and a straight bar on the front of the N instead of the loop. Or curve the tops of other letters so it fits in. I like this though, everyone else on this page: you suck. Except Toopski.
     
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  15. Willis1989

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    Whats up peeps, not posted in a while because frankly I havent done anything worth posting. Feel as though ive been going backwards rather than progressing, any crits would be great

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    Candi - Like the second piece, the red one, I think your letters aint bad just need a bit of work, your colouring is good id just work on letters a bit more, feel free to ignore me as my letters suck anyway.

    Osmosis - Really like the Lincoln pic

    S33on3 - I like the piece colours are nice but cant really read it

    ABK - Not bad, the bar on top of A is a little thick, I find Bs and Ks really hard so cant really give any crits on those
     
  16. Mr. Ignorance

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    Made during English class --> easy one. What do you guys think?

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  17. KroeGHK

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    just messin around
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    exchange with osmosis
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    some shit
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    little collab with my girl (ehh..)
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  18. Willis1989

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    Bump for crits

    Kroe those are dope, youve progressed a shit load since I last posted, really like that throw at the top
     
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