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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Mr. Ignorance

    Mr. Ignorance Member

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    My agenda:

    ai48.tinypic.com_20kx7j7.jpg

    Grim; 3D looks a bit out of porportion and incorrect, i like the R and the M looks fine for me.
    Clot; L ismuch better in this one. But why dont you add something extra to your drawing?
     
  2. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    MN- bar widths and letter heights. looks good though
     

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  3. QUEEZ

    QUEEZ Senior Member

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    nice grim piece dank i like it all exept for the grims right hand holding the scyfe his hands backwards
     
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  4. BDSM

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  5. Kinger79

    Kinger79 Member

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    BDSM: lose the connections from the R to the I and the I to the M. and watch the height of your letters. other than that its pretty decent!
     
  6. KroeGHK

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    IMG_5300.jpg
    WILTR
    tryin some new shit
     
  7. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    ignorance nice keep doing them simples, i think the A on the left side looks kinda off but that B on the left side is nice, best letter there i think

    Dank looks dope and clean as fuk as always, dig that cut u did on the middle open part of the R

    BDSM loose the extensions and take it back astep or 2 maybe, keep at it dude

    kroe thats so trippy, that texture you gave it is sick, grimey and shit i dig it

    heres one unfinished thing that i need some crits on and the second is just shit i drew at work killing time IMG_0066.JPG IMG_0068.JPG
     
  8. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    The 2nd R is a B. flip those images. Youve improved though.
    Queez- the hand isnt backwards. I know my hands, mang.
     
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  9. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    thanks dank, appreciate it. by flip those images do you meen flip the 2 legs of the 2nd R or switch the R's?
     
  10. Semper

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    the pictures are sideways. Only crit I got is that in the left one you have heaps of detail in the middle of the O but no where else.
     
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  11. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    maybe it was just on my phone but the images were sideways
     
  12. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    oh wtf the 2 images are normal for me, thats fucking weird. and thanks or the crit semp, i see what ur sayig and i dont really like that O but was just trying something new, il keep fuking with it and keep wat u said in mind
     
  13. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    somthing that was drawn a little while ago but just added color and shit now. coloring looks kinda wack i think, letters rnt ahole lot better i dont think, any crits would be cool
    IMG_0070.JPG
     
  14. Semper

    Semper Moderator

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    on my i pad they're sideways but on my computer they're the right way up

    after the G it just went to shit
    image (52).jpeg image (53).jpeg
     
  15. Gatsoi

    Gatsoi Senior Member

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    ai880.photobucket.com_albums_ac9_gatsoi_IMG_20120928_021909.jpg
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  16. KroeGHK

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  17. no-sleep

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    dope fill but the 3D in the W should be shorter
     
  18. QUEEZ

    QUEEZ Senior Member

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    sketch import 003.jpg something i did in math class crits!!!!
     
  19. dankbudz

    dankbudz Elite Member

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    good for keeping it simple, the E and A is far apart though, id try a less round W, and lose the very bottom and top left extension on the E

    gatsoi that nes is nice.

    some sketch.
     

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  20. Kaze

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    semp maybe lose some of the bends in ur letters like in the M, you've gotten better but i think you may be tryin to push it a little. i think if you did some precise keyboard letters and try to make it look as if it just came off a printing press or somshit, just try to make it look exact and all proportioned.. its harder then it looks. i still try and do this and it helps

    kroe that character is sick, you got trippy ass characters i dig em

    queez i second everthing dank said

    nes thats dope, i dig the color scheme, inspiring me to try somthing similar lol since i cant do any affects


    dank i dig that L and E, i think if u colored ur piece with a diamond affect it would look dope, i think u may have done this already in the past