crit me

 

i dont dig how the T's are connected, idk it just reads as "sluls wilh bulls" with them like that, might just be me though, looks good other that that
flicks for talk, my hands are so shit when they matter the most

 

bulls are ok too :>

 

That connected T is corny, homie.

You're a couple of years behind me, yet I still find you doing 3monther techniques n' shit.


DON'T Connect your letters *****', it gives off an air that insinuates inexperience. JUST STOP, AND START... Over.

 

Crits on mine plz

 

he made it up [Broken External Image]:http://www.zhujiad.com/5-10.jpg

 

yeah dude I thought so too... goddamit that was dumb of me... dont know why I did it lol I was having kindof a writers block I guess
wasnt feeling the letters heh whatever

 

I like the H and the underline. The tag is pretty good.

 

if i didnt know any better, id say that's a T, not a P

 

HAHAHA ^

 

Is my shit getting better or worse?

 

^ lol

 

Just messing around, but would appreciate some Crits. I am just beginning to try and fancy my tag up (I already can do straight squished blocky letters). So this is what I came up with.
#2 I think is my favourite out of the bunch. I also tried some One Liners at the top, but I know they suck lol.

Crits please! Cheers

 

keep it simple still, i dont like any of the s's tbh

 

Appreciated. I've had reservations with the S as well. I wasn't sure on the A either.
Here is a simple one I did, at least I think it is simple.
Plus just trying some effects, I know that they look like shit for the most part.

View attachment 90082

 

bump again..... [Broken External Image]:http://www.zhujiad.com/5-10.jpg

 

top right corner is nicest i think but the S and T are little off, do something to them

 

Wtf? How does this at all sound gang related? Bad hand

 

I've been working on my tag trying to make it better.Crits please!