Hey guys this is my first wall I've done in years I know it needs work so I'm open to criticism sorry about the picture quality only had an iPhone with me

 

At least your iphone has a flash you rich kid. Do all the letters like the F. Straight and simple

 

Will do thanks for the advice

 

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Nice shit revom. V is too small in the last flick tho, stay up

 

kickin it simple

 

nice colors!!!!... that sevon suuucks though, whoever did that probably cried themselves to sleep, and whys that W got a fat belly on the side of it?

digging the R in the revom tho


Mori- that ASPA on the last page is hot, digging the symmetry n style

 

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New outline I was trying. Think I'm going to do some more simples next

 

I like the outline

 

Thicker bars, Fake.

Fuckin a.

 

^ this guy...

 

Am I right or am I right?

 

That last FAKE is cleannnnnn

 

paranoya I'm missing the letter structure almost entirely dude Looks like Durfa/Hurfa/Durfn/Hurfn idk tf what the swoops underneath are. good job on getting up, but maybe paint from sketch next time, with simple bars or just figure out a throwie because that's just plain confusing, and fake that is way way cleaner than what I have

 

Any crits for improvment? Not sure I can make my bars much thicker with this style but I'll try it out

 

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