Every dondi piece there is dope by today's standard...

Also just because you posted slightly better sketches doesn't mean were gonna be like 'yoooo dawg you were right!! Every single more experienced person here telling you to go back to simple lettering was wrongg dawg! Those sketches you just posted blatantly ignoring all our advice has sure taught us a lesson!!'

There are so many inconsistencies with proportion, and truth be told i don't even care if a toy remains so, i just really dislike you
Conclusion being if you continue to ignore what we're saying and get mad at us instead then chances are you're only gonna get "proper" crits from toys and more angry rants from me (which i find pretty amusing) and potentially others

 

If you continue to ignore what we're saying and then get mad at us then you can just sit in the corner with the stupid hat on like xXORDIEXx. I'm sure you'd enjoy that.

 

Not sure if im digging this style, crits?

 

Your O looks like a W, I'm sure you saw that already. But Besides that your K needs a little work...Or maybe a lot. Everything else isn't too shabby.

 

yeah i was disapointed in the k, ill change it up next time

 

@Fade I think there's about 500 other people who write Fade.. Not saying change it but it's pretty common. Also i wouldn't worry about fills and colors until you get your structure down.

Trying some new shit.

 

That D is dope as man!

 

whats this "we", and "us" business?

 

I assume getting accepted by the "more experienced" writers isn't in my agenda today. Darn.

 

Thats dope cred, only thing i would say is that the bottom right of the C may stick out a smidge too far. But i dig it, should look good with color

 

@ Willis yo I'm not sayin you gotta change your name but this dude I know from TNR crew writes Ease, he's from Santa Fe so I guess it dont matter if your in a different area code but you might wanna consider writing something else..

 

looks good MN, nice colors and i dig that 4, maybe the bottom horizontal bar on the bottom of your I could have been on a little bit less of a slant

 

now look at that. looks good except the I. get rid of that cut middle bar, or execute it better. name is better that way too

 

those purples are nice looks cool

 

Yo that's pretty dope dude, i rekn the legs too thin on the R but.

And to that guy with the mortal combat picture, eeevery wordis taken so unless they're in your hood or internationally known, who gives a fuck

Nd to mn , same deal as everyone said, that little cut into the i was bad news, and maaybe that tiny bit bumping out at the bottom of the 4, but i also have a feelin that's just me, nd yeah 4ize is better

 

Think so? Been fuckin with it lately.

 

@MN really digging that man. Good shit.

Don't like this one as much, still needs some tweaks.

 

Trying something different any crits?