im not gonna battle you bitch, you have nothing to prove other than you suck, which is already well known.
now I'm angreeeey, aaah shit, lets battle nikaaaaaaa I'm so fuckin mad, so many beefs bouta go down and toasted n roasted n shit, lets battle our beef through a battle in our black books on the interwebz, son. this so hood son, you called me out, I'm all in son. real talk son. real fuckin talk. its on.
Im not gunna waste my time battling you... You probably wont even come through and if u did it wont be worth it.
Bump for more crits, got it in just before all the beef started again. Dank has proved himself as a good writer on here. I looked back to try and see some of Sneez's posts to compare them with Danks but went back about ten pages an couldnt find any. Post something in this page for me to see Sneez. Anyway, some writers on here should practice more instead of chatting shit online to people your not ever going to meet anyway. Never understood why people get so pissed off at people online. OH and also, ive figured that one of the main reasons people probably talk so much shit to newbies on here is because everyday there is another newcomer who has been writing for like a month and thinks theyre the shit, it gets boring trolling through the shit and the shit talking on this forum just to find a couple of goood pieces in with all the bad. Sooooo many toys have this attitude that theyre so much better than thet are and it gets so boring that no wonder people talk so much shit on here. Let your work and your drawing skills do the talking for you. Again, bump for crits, am I going in the right direction here? [/QUOTE]
@primitiveplus Trim down the extension on the G a little bit for the first one (still an awesome piece) and fix the shoe G on the last one (that lil KF bubble kinda threw me off as did that weird extension). BTW I'll try to have your exchange in by the end of the week @SneeZ if he dosnt want to battle you he's not going to. Just get some pieces in for us to crit and move on. Although watching this internet beef is pretty entertaining. I've had a lot goin on and haven't had time for anything. Im changing my name to HOPR theres already somebody in philly who writes SIK albeit he's not amazing but he's older and more experienced than me, SIKO also makes me sound like a but pirate. Had some enlightened conversation goin on in here before the beef started up. Can we keep that going and keep the stupid shit down to a minimum.
@cider yeah hahah, the second one was a little wonky; i was experimenting with my letter structure, as you can probably tell. thanks for the tip though, i'll be sure to make my G a little less esoteric next time
It looks good willis, middle part of the S maybe gets a little thin, i like wat u did with the last e, just keep drawing them out and u will see improvement Looking good jpeg
No idea where bolognese came into this.. Anyway this post is to tell you that you suck and that i hate you. I've never even met you but the pure fact that you're presence on the internet means that somewhere in this world there is a real life douchebag that contains all the faggy gay traits that you represent yourself with on a graffiti forum makes me hate you. I haven't even seen you're graffiti but from everyone's tired response to you i can tell you actually do suck at graffiti which makes this even better. And if you wanna battle you have to be ready for my sketch as it will be produced with my semen on your mother's tits, so please don't be rude and pick a respectable word. And p.s keep bolognese out of this bitch