lose all the bumps on the letters. look like tumors. practice a simple-er throw a few hundred times, you'll get it.
K - scrap it. start over. kind of looks like a H with a mullet. might want to keep the bottom right leg, though. i like the way it swoops to left and the A sweeps to the right. A - beef up the "slide" on the a, but be mindful not to turn the letter into a R. if you don't know what i mean by that say so and i'll do you a quick ms paint. S - again, beef up the slide. pump that shit up with some flavor so that you have a nice bubble that comes down and meets the smaller one. T - stands for "totally-fucked" this looks like an ugly lowercase R. to make more clear what the letter is show the leg connecting to the top on the left side as well as the right. and don't have the line go past one another like that.
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make your pictures smaller, id make the top horizontal bar of your T come down further and keep both sides of it level to each other(line up), just keep practicing the basics and u will slowly progress
i would shit on you, if the flick weren't doing it for you already. in all seriousness, i would stick to a style derivative to the blue outlined one. ^ this one looks like an 'oh henry' dipped in silver paint.
@AuthenticHerb stop fucking double posting and your K looks like an H completely. Also on your S you need to make that bottom testicle looking thing the same/similar to the top less testicle looking thing. Ok try blowing up your tag into bubble letters then go from there. It should be interesting, just keep an eye on your proportions/spacing. I've never done it myself but it seems like an interesting concept so fuck it.
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9 am saturday class, jacked up on coffee. I've been slackin on throwies, so i gave it a shot. also random doodle character. Crits? @toop - really diggin them. the R and A are dope dude