since you asked to be put in your place: i really hope you haven't been writing as long as you've had an account. cause seriously, that's sub-par for even the newest of writers. your 3D is spot on, that's about it however. as all newbies are told; drop connections, extensions, and add-on's of any sort, until you can properly draw a structured letter. in hindsight, maybe keyboard letters aren't the best letters to copy, but they are legible, and that's what you need your letters to be. don't quit or bitch, just come back with something more simple.
^^^Should have lost that extension on the S imo, it just doesn't fit. it's a straight style, could have been a tab bit cleaner but it looks like a quickie.
New name, first piece in a long time. I would really like some feedback on this. [Broken External Image]:http://i2.minus.com/i6TJpcsZJpGQT.png
Okay, think I'm slowly starting to improve. Crits please. (Also, am I posting too frequently? I was reading a few posts back, noticing some people posting more or less the same stuff over and over again, and I don't wanna be one of those people.) [Broken External Image]:http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/2483/feb91.jpg
^^^Work on your shape structure, homie. Like the ends of that Z are deformed. you need to practice drawing perfect bars. Rectangles don't have any pointy ends. And try to work on the size of your letters. The E's are noticeably smaller. If you have a large letter in the front and some smaller ones in the middle then you need to balance it out with another large letter somewhere near the end.
@Krate before you start trying to add steez you need to get your letter structure and sizing down. That means no arrows, no drips no effects nothin all you need is some solid bars. @itszaaynub Try drawing in pencil so you can tweak things like the rounded edges and deformed ends Sanguine was talkin about. Haven't posted in awhile so heres a philly wicked I've been working on reads HOPR... If any of you know wicked's feel free to crit.
if it is not one thing its another , this time it is paper space my s's geez i think i may make an s stencil
Another piece I just did. Crits? And sorry about the orangeish coloring in the middle, weird light when I took the picture.
I hate to give crits considering that it's better than anything I can do, but the "E" is mostly covered, it'd look better if it was spaced out a bit.