when i use a capital I it puts to much space in between the letter ... ill give it a try tho i thought this was a toy forum...ya'll startin to scare me
@CoolDawg like your style dude, original. @Fred think this is alot better than the dolia's. Trying to get some sketching time with bars n stuff during a busy period. Looks like i got a writersblock, no inspiration at all. Crits would be nice! [/IMG]
@Revom try to make your lines cleaner. Your structure isn't bad but the lines are a bit wobbly. Not bad at all though. Same basic structure, just with more funk.
^ the left side of the p and r need to be straight, the right sides need to be more round and to much of a gap between legs of the r
Thought id try and add some extentions and shit to my letters, didnt turn out great, not really sure where I should be adding extentions or if any of these are any good. oh, and an S ive been working on
^Sarcasm? Willis. Start off by putting those little things off your bars, I don't know what to call them. You know those little tiny extensions that just dot really effect the piece? Well if you know what I mean then use them for a while and when you can use them comfortably then pretty much where you can out them you can put an extension. You can out them in other places but that just comes naturally when you've been fucking around for long enough. I hope that makes sense because my head is fucking with me at the moment
@cred, man ur stuff just seems to be getting better everytime I look on this thread, the colours are pretty sick too. @cooldawg, those letters are mad mate I really like them I'd love to see a coloured version of it. Ok Iv been doing a lot of simple lettered pieces and havnt bothered posting as I'd just be posting the same shit over and over, I'm having a go at bending letters and just trying to make them my own, here's a quick pencil sketch of what I'm playing at I'm not a fan of the D though. Any crits plz would like to know if I'm heading in the right direction?
^ he is Nice ewal, it's good to see you finally putting a little bit of funk into your letters. Pretty much just keep doing what you're doing and it should evolve from there.