That was really the boost of confidence and criticism that made me leave bombingscience in the first place.....
I'd say go back to basic, no arrows or swirls and ur 's' looks like a 5. Just do it simple and don't try to make it 'stylish' keep it simple and make it look clean and flow nice then ur style will come naturally in time don't rush it, Rome wasn't built in a day
Literally just hand write it out Page after page after page. make your letters a little closer together and just write until you stop seeing individual letters and just the flow of the line then you'll be able to come up with something that works well. it will come if you work on it. but seriously buy a pack of 500 pages of printing paper and write on all of it both sides fill 'er up. when you finish if you don't have something your happy with start again.
Well just keep hand writing it on paper over and over, look at your letters and the size of them and how they sit next to each other you need something that looks nice to look at, keep letters simple to begin with don't try and add flair or anything to the letters yet
thats how i seen it done, with an exacto knife. you cut that hole at all and your messing with the direction
500+ pages is a start....no shit, ive killed a small forest just practicing bullshit-over and over again lol. its the only way to learn and improve
^thats a nice color but the tag its self is not so nice, id say just handwrite and flow will develop, like everyone else hears basically muddy top picture looks like u got crossed out kinda when u do the line through it like that, just work on your spacing of your letters, have them all consistently closer together but dont overlap them