@krate you're far from using extensions my dood. Focus on creating flow solely with your structure first. Perfect that shit, then you can try extensions.
Willis - loving the style of the E on the lower one man looks funky Toop - that's some good use of dead markers man lol I like it. Not feeling that one liner tho
"Somie" Havent done graff in a minute, Lemme know what you guys think The S and the O are a little empty, gonna edit that in a few.
somie- dont bother with colours dude, get some form of letters down these are all wavy and what not ears - looks alright maybe thicken up the e abit and idk about those little things in the r
@willis id say keep the bar widths of the middle of the a and the horizontal bar of the r the same(bottom sketch) crits?
that thing on the back of your k should go IMO. It's no were else in the piece along with the bit on the top part of the E. I'd say straighten out the main leg of the K (no chunk where the other piece meets). I feel like the U and E should come lower on the page as well. Solid though. Clean it up and finish it.
I like the somie. i can see structure in there, the S could use a bit of filling in at the top, and the O at the bottom though. but you said that so... yeah. Ide like to see more of your stuff.
toop and sybe, doin alright. willis - keep bangin out those simps and keep trying new stuff out, see what works with you and what you can expand with skue - overall good letters just spaced out too much (i suppose it works, but I think it'd look better that way) and your K looks a little more advanced than the others having more bends and such. somie - try to get some better structure in your work , for instance your s getting very skinny at the top and the bottom swing gets fat like the rest of the letters. jtume - good structure and flow, just try to define each letter apart from each other when connected like that. exchange with derpybudz
derpybuds, lol, nice imfeelin the fill, although the 3d is kind of bland, but thats just me whenever i see 3d with nothing in it and its a different color than the outline it just looks incomplete. digging that fill too. and those hands
@Jesr tried to listen to your cirts @MN i know i feel like my k might be the letter I've pushed father than the others :/ (on another note idk why the camera fucked this up but the red and blue background u see is actually pink and blue...gave this sketch to my girl and intended cotton candy colors lol)
thanks for the crits guys, ive been writing for total about 3 years, just getting back into it though, this was my first piece in almost a year. as a background, i do art, but graffiti is what got me started so Im trying to get back into it, just because its fun and its a nice way to express, working on another piece, the S in my last piece was shitty as fuck, i hate it now, so ill make the next one up to my standards. I do art, graffiti is my hobby so my pieces are going to be a little more artsy rather than graffiti like, just my style and i love it so im keeping it.