im horrible at drawing lines on the comp lol but i dont like the notch on the 4 (circled) and the tail of the z i feel should be more bar like and less pinched off. but thats just me. Overall i like it, good solid style, i feel the z is the weakest though.
First time posting in the BB thread, I'm still getting the basics of letter form & whatnot down so I'm just doing Simps and Some Ribbon letters to start out. all crits appreciated. I totally botched the fill in here with a pastel, not a good idea.
@TOLR8 Lose those things on the H, and I agree with fade, your K looks like an R. draw simpler. Never got any crits on this one
^ put the O slightly more straight up, and work on the spacing between the I and A, and ide say lose the extension on the I and make the dot more circular and i think they would be pretty solid.
Sleep - Keep and eye on bar widths remember and keep them the same, I always forget my bar widths before I ink a piece Dolia - The I is kinda hidden, maybe space last 3 letters a bit more, and put less of a tilt on the O Hak - Looks not bad, maybe pull the top left bar of the K out a little bit, id maybe make the bars ar the top of the A the same width as they are at bottom ive had writers block for so long, everything I draw just looks shit to me, this is the first piece ive inked in nearly a month, crits please.
Alright I got it figured how to post pics let me know what I can do to get better 2013-03-25_10-59-49_146 by scolon1118, on Flickr 2013-03-25_11-00-12_340 by scolon1118, on Flickr 2013-03-18_09-26-41_143 by scolon1118, on Flickr 2013-03-19_22-05-20_821 by scolon1118, on Flickr 2013-03-19_22-05-01_640 by scolon1118, on Flickr
^^^i like the second one the only problem is it is sideways....maybe try taking the picture sideways so that it comes out the right way...the throwie is not bad either....i'd say turn them the right way first tho and then itll be easier to critique witout hurtin ur neck
I tried all that but it didn't work i've decided to stop with wildstyle and work on straight letters and handstyles and maybe throw ups
DOLIA: might I suggest trying a D that isn't shaped like a droopy scrotum. I know what kind of D you're going for but there's a lot of other ways to do one and you might find that a different structure will suit you better.
No-sleep, I wasn't talking about neoses, I was talking about a flick this SEND guy posted but he deleted it, trust me, it had no structure whatsoever and there were arrows shooting out from every direction.