Fred - I like that last one man the cloud looks nice Bible - like the one with the pentagram in it and I'm liking the face in the B Toop - I'm liking the new word the letters look good together Been ill as fuck recently not had any inspiration at all first thing Iv drawn in days I feel sloppyer than usual any useful crits? and I'm aware my 3d is off I'm still practising it
The top one is the best one, and the B is B like. Colored version of the outline i posted earlier, not proud of it lol. Dont mind the pencil doodles
Been working on keyboard letters, so not much of a point in posting, but I just wanted to check if you guys think I'm at least going in the right direction.
@krate: by leaning the A back like that you've unified the KRA combo, but created a negative space gap that's really noticeable between the A and T. when you're working on simple stuff like this you really have to study the way the letters relate to each other. and make sure that the eye isn't drawn into any large gaps, or ugly spots. nice try though. try to be really critical of everything you do, look at it like it wasn't yours.
add a 4th letter or something. 3 letters are hard to pull off. add a "S" at the end and make it work. now WORK it.
@Neo : Honestly I don't think adding another letter will make it easier for you... Plus a lot of writer can drop super cool piece with a 3 letters blaze... I think you should bend the ''O'' on the left to make your piece symmetric. With 3 letters, you kinda need to have this symmetric effect. Overall, lettring is ok but you need to find a way to make it look proper...