Damn son you gotta work on your cut backs... that looks super blotched what happened to all your Steez?? You got some nice pieces my dude but that one is stinky... you need to definitely focus on some bars to make that style work for you
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I agree with Skue, the grimey letters are cool and all, they also seem extremely.... "Lazy"? I guess would be the word. It's like you don't have to have proper structure if you are using this "Grimey" style. There are only the few that can pull it off. *Cough* Augor.
DZED - I'd say it looks a bit squashed together, i'm liking your S and the purple drippy shit tho haha. i think if u did all the letters a bit smaller and gave them their own space it would be better Crits?
For sure man, I see the thing about space definitely. I've got some more flicks in a different style I'll put up in a bit