Well it's fairly clean. The A doesn't overlap the P which looks a bit odd. The V looks a bit bigger than the rest but it kinda looks like it's in 3 parts, like the V is alone, the A is connected to the P, and the I is to the D. If you could get some even space between all of them it'd look nice.
Simples please, if you know what bars are then use them. If not go check out the new to graffiti thread.
critz? Basically the same thing, just trying to get these perfect before I start adding any funk to em. My hand got shaky on the D
I'm not great, but I'll share my thoughts... You're ready when you understand why you've been doing them repeatedly. Noa: The O looks a bit odd, maybe its the dead space inside the letter compared to the N and A? Just looks a little out of to me place Vapid: Letter width is consistent but the letters are fighting each other for space. Try a capital A, should flow better between the V an P Some of mine. Posted in the judgement thread, but I'd like some feedback:
Think most will say what semper said, keep it more simple. And try to work with bars, that can help a lot with making your letters more consistent. Practice a lot with that before you try all the extra stuff
Okay, thanks for the opinions guys. @bhom yes, simple like that. I can't really tell if you are using bars or not, but if you aren't you should. Just keep doing keyboard letter pieces like that until they're coming out clean and looking as close to looking exactly like the letters on your keyboard as possible, and try to keep your bars the same widths. Of course you shouldn't take what I say as fact, Im still super toy and you should listen more to the more experienced writers on here, but Im pretty sure this is good advice so there you go.
maybe try a new name with easier letters. H's and O's and B's are kinda annoying and slightly more difficult for someone just starting.
Figured I'd put this here instead of simples (still simple though...). Ran out of room for the last O so just did as much as I could.
can i please have helpful criticism on this? just something quick to post, and does anyone know if this name is taken by anyone big..? i searched the web but did not find anything....