Ive been trying to work a little more on my throwies, and here's what Ive got right now. Both came out really sloppy (especially the bottom) but Ill work on that later. For now any crits on either of them?

 

Did one a bit cleaner. shadows off but oh well. Critz welcome.

 

ok then

 

mad respect fever. I just assumed you were a toy in this thread.
That was my mistake. You're getting up. Gotta give it to you on that.
Sorry if I came across as dissing you. No hate man.

 

Recently started getting in to graff, this is my first throw up evar, crit please!!
It says Mits

 

Don't think I've posted a throwie before, I've been writing for years now and have yet to come up with any that I'm satisfied with.

 

semper just keep practicing it, maybe take some stuff off of it (simplify abit) i think theres flow there just the letters are lacking and once u get some nice letters they will just look that much better with flow, honestly though your piecing is sick so dont get too hung up over throws, there cool and all i love em but piecing IS 'the bee's knees'

vapid just keep doing those, i think the one with the more normal V looks better but just keep fuking around with it/experimenting but dont go too far, you want to stay very basic at this point, keep at it dude

mits that T and S dont look like a T and S, you want to have some definition on the left horizontal part of the T so it looks like a T and for the S you want to have more definition on the bottom part and the angle of the to part kinda looks off, just keep practicing and look around at other graff just dont bite

skunk, just keep practicing with simple throws

fever nice ups, not really a fan of the throw style but to each there own, keep it up man

 

lol

 

help

 

I know its bad man, but please more constrictive crit that just "lol"
I started out with graff like 2 weeks ago, you cant expect too much right now

 

im not really one to talk, but you needa just start out with simple keyboard letter throwies, make sure your letters are all the same size, dont try to add any style at all, go back to the new to graff thread if you havent been there yet

 

ok Thanks Ill do that

 

That thread is a good start indeed
also if you do a throwie i know it doesnt have to be perfect, its not a piece, but try to have the outline a bit more fluent. And if you color your throwie color it with just left to right strokes nothing else, that will look a lot cleaner then.
For the rest start simple indeed and practice a lot

 

better? worse?
bubbley bottoms ,curvy/pointy tops.
Constructive crit pls

 

pointy tops are wack. keep workin on it bro!

 

And try a bit different t, it looks like a lowercase r now to me

 

Better? worse?

 

Still not simple enough. Looks more like amorphous blobs than letters. The attempt prior to this was better

 

ok I really hate doing M´s :/