the top one is much better than the bottom one, i suggest bringing the line down on the G and just putting a line in the A wrather than a lightning bolt and redo the R but definantly go with the top one
Fix the second I and the bottom leg of the s'. tons of potential also, the lines in the S' need to go imo
View attachment 641120 This is my first post in bombing science. I was looking for some suggestions to help get better. I was using rusto and stock tips :/
Yo phaybzzz thanks amigo I'll try to do something for you later if I'm not too drunk or coloring on white girls lmao