Simples guy^

Stop with the colour schemes and jack o lantern looking letters.

Straight letters with a 3d. Do those till your hands hurt, then do more.

 

Syne called it how it is. If you are first starting out, dont try to funk out your letters or add colors. Simple straight letters with 3d and no color scheme is a great way to start

 

Is my throwup worth to slap a sticker or to paint it somewhere? It is not really toy is it? what should I improve?

 

yeah its really muffed up bro. work on strate blockbuster letters im tellin ya.

 

mefisto, same thing with you.

Doesnt matter whether your doing throws or pieces, if you cant do simples, theyll both look like shit.

Simples help you learn proportion.

 

Practiced some proportions, how bout this? is it correct?

 

Dont make bubble letters like that.

Just straight letters, side by side, like your keyboard.

 

Is it really that bad??? I'm mean I'm toy, but I don't think it's hiteous. Tell me how I can improve it

 

^read syne's comments

 

so like mad simple like this for practice?

 

Yes! And try 3d from different directions, and form your letters from the simples step by step!

 

after you can do those strate letters off top, you can start squeezing them together and maybe overlap em a bit.

 

^ exactly.

youll catch onto it quick

 

Haven't sketched in forever, rusty blah blah blah. Glad to be back in my book. Crits welcome


Sorry for cell pics

 

Been a while since I've been able to post any pics, any crits you have would be great.

 

Don't mind the n on the tag, Crit this shit

 

youre sketching and you have to make it flow naturally. just keep working on making it flow dude you aren't gonna get good at it overnight so forget THAT notion.
* I was thinking this was the throw thread but my crit still applies since this is supposed top be a throw.

 

rusty as fuck. haven't sketched much for a minute. crit?