@newk thx bru @vapid nice man youve made big progress! Work on those curves and on the drop shadow, it seems a bit off on your I and D. Also your handstyle A needs work @raph as iluvcash said the 3d on your Y looks off. Also im not digging the flow of your N and of the top left of your Y but that might just be me. Good work tho @iluvcash thats fresh i like the overall look and shape but your second S looks rushed/not as nice as the first. Also your second I on the bottom right of it looks off. Again good work doe Heres my outline for the mother contest
Thnx iluvcash and ance! @ance: sketch looks promising, watch your 3d here and there a bit. The one thing i dont like to much is the right side of the M
Heres the final product. The page curled up due to humidity making some of the 3d look off. The uni compounds the problem because it actually is off aha... tried to go too quick Anyways those hands are shwag too but wateva it is what it is
Hey bs, tried working on my cuves and they're coming out slightly better but still need a lot of work. I dont really like the I, but besides that crits are welcome as usual.
Clean yo. The top left of your I could be more visible. Also picture your P if you moved its hole down just a bit instead of being in the middle of the curve, that would make the curve big at the top and smaller at the bottom giving it a nicer flow
Thanks dog, I'll work on it. Idk, Id just feel weird about working with changing bar widths when Im still this toy, but if you think it could be pulled off there I'll go for it.
@Ance, that mother piece is dope! Feelin it! @Vapid, nice clean simp bro. I like the curve on the V and the bend in the I, but like ance said, pronounce the top left of the I a little more. Also, maybe try extending where the bottom of the bar on the D ends? if that makes sense? sorta like, adding a serif to the bottom of it? Could be cool, idk. Recent digi-panel for talkin' (V is whack as hell, I know)
@NEwker when you say where the bottom bar of the D ends do you mean from the curve going left or the straight bar going down?
The Curved bar. Was gonna say either could work, but extending the straight bar Up would make it a b, and down would make it a P, haha. Either way, it's up to you bro, I think it could a a little bit more without going out of what you're comfortable with, whilst still venturing away from straight up keyboard steeze.
Okay, that sounds like it could work, I'll try it out. I also need to get that curve on the D cleaner.
I haven't posted much in a while been on Instagram putting everything up on there and had to change my name but all for the best I suppose I'd like crits but if you want follow me on Instagram @ _kuraj_
yo queez, mad improvement since I last peeped your ish. only thing that bugs me are your S's. wanna xchange? your word is fresh. flick for talks
ance- looking good, possibly tone it down a tad on the 'm', other than that nice, the R is pretty sick vapid- getting there pal! your drop shadow looks good on that. i agree with ance that lowering the hole on the P might give it a bit more style, keep at it queez- looking good except i think your K could do with some work, perhaps put the bend in the bottom bar instead of the top one if you know what i mean? other than that looks good newker-i think you should try to keep your bar widths more consistent, they seem to vary a bit but if you nailed that it would look better i reckon Trying different styles, crits welcome. (sorry about pic quality)
@Junglizt: the k looks a bit thin to me on the round one (left side), like the top one the most. You could try some with a total different K though, like in all 4 you now have the right top part of the K small compared to the rest of the K, you could try to vary that a bit if you know what i mean. Characters are nicely done aswell! Exchange with Junglizt, i kinda overdid it with the cracks in the 3D. crits are welcome
I'm down for the exchange and no more s so no worries and thanks man haha you write revom ill start now