@queez the R on the revom throw looks more like an H, besides that Im diggin it. SO I tried some of the suggestions and some other minor things and this is what I got. the serif on the D is kind of hard to see with the I, it just kind of looks like its uneven, but oh well. Crits?
^^lookin pretty solid on the outline...not feelin the top of the p, smoothed without serif will eliminate uneven bar on the curve of the p....over all lookin pretty clean
bump for crits? these last few pages have been quite the eyesore tbh, most of you need to just go back to the simplest of simples and rock those till your hands fall off
Kroe - I've seen much better from you, but it's really only the E that got messed up in a couple places 1st pic I don't like how the E is crooked, I think you should have just kept them all aligned 2nd pic is the best but you made the bottom of the E too fat compared to all the other bars. It doesn't look bad, just not consistent with the other letters 3rd pic looks like you did it pretty fast, but the bottom bar the E is off I think you should write YOTEL instead of YOTE though, yotel sounds cooler and it's funny
lol i was thinking peyote when i thought of it, liked the letters did this recently but the T throws the whole thing off i think, thanks for the crits
^^^the yote outline is super smooth the curly's on the t thow no bueno so..spaced out the g and a put more curve in the s..basic black and white outline for the color blind..crits needed
dreams 3;16 the bottom of the I is missing it makes it looke like a T the africa outline is sick but there is no madagascar and that ruined it for me...
becuz it is almost symmetrical i think you could use the H to balance the I to get same tilt...the bar on the left part of the h is a lil thik too