The g looks consistent but other letters are off, try just doing a normal horizontal bar in your a, really work on your R and your S looks a little wonky, try to make ur bottom leg pf ur R flow better and more consistently, just keep practicing man you will get it.
Okur... change your name. Germs, i quite like your style, work on cleanliness. that will come with practice though. Dregs, nice and clean though work on letter structure a bit more. Sychophant, hit the black book some more and work on your letters. bar width/style/height etc.