the bottom leg of the H is at an angle ...open up the top of the H and then the i can sit like the first i...

 

Managed to get a little time to draw, any crits?

 

getting better all the time vapid, maybe try to get the A lose from the V by curving one of that bars that connects them

 

@syco ahh i gotcha! thanks that helps
Lookin good vapid! It would look tight if you made the p taller and a little wider maybe the d also, to try and make your word one solid even bar

 

Thanks all, and iluvcash, what did you mean by make my word one solid bar?

 

Its hard to explain but i hope this shows it, keeping the letter all symetrical instead of the p and the d going down more

Done mind the shitty sketch lol

 

Very much dislike the 3d but appart from that, crits?

 

Ah, okay I got ya dog.

 

And Ance, not my place to crit something that beyond me, but Im really not feeling the bubbles man.

 

Workn on a new style

 

Vapid you're definitely on track, good to see someone finally taking our advice and starting simple, you'll go far.

Tek the extensions aren't really working.

Quick shit for the smog battle

 

Some of the things I have done.. there are many more, but these are just a few I have digitalize







Characters redrawn:

 

Sloppy as hell, don't mind the sloppy tags either lol

 

just messing around wit color...

 

that pink real;ly sets it off imo dope shit

 

@ Flocka make your V fatter and more of its own letter it just looks kinda smashed in there

 

Word. Ill do that thanks

 

Semper that Smog fill in is on point!!! I dig it man!

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